Roses are red
Violets are blue
Team 5 block rock what about you?
Roses are red
Violets are blue
Come to pt england we will love you but
Don’t worry we don’t bite because we are here to make things right
Don’t worry we don’t bite because we are here to make things right
Roses are red
Violets are blue
Come to pt england and you’ll have the best teachers
Hey Tatiana love the poem, I loved how you talked about convincing people to come to Pt England School, everything you've said is true. Keep up the good work!!
ReplyDeleteMalo e lelei Tatiana
ReplyDeleteI really love your Rhyming poem. It really made me laugh.You made me smile and it even made me proud,i love the first paragraph you made up and it really relates to team five too!
Hi, Tatiana i love how you talked about Team 5.
ReplyDeleteHey tatiana i loved the way how you said come to Point England you are right we really need new student but well done proud of you.
ReplyDeleteBonjour Tatiana I love the way how you describe about Pt Engaland School
ReplyDeleteon the 3rd line on the bottom you have too much words
I hope you fix it up a bit
Au revoir - Bye for now, and also Keep up the good work :)
Hi Tatiana,nice poem about team 5 and about Pt England school and your poem made me more comfortable here, have you thought about writing some more poems I will like to read more poems from you, keep up the good work!!!
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Tatiana, I really like your poem about Pt England and Team 5 block.One thing that you might jhave to work on is setting your stanza and aslo setting up your lines, but overall your poem is amazing. I can't wait for more poem and school work like this. Keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteRegards,
Chastyti
Hi Tatiana, I really like the poem but I think that you forgot to tage me in because how we were working together so yeah, but besides that I really think it awesome. Keep it up and well done
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