Thursday, 20 October 2016

Behind the door

Once a upon time there lived two girls named Penny and Angel. They were going for a walk to their Nana Hazel. She was very sick so they wanted to see how she was. On the way they got hungry but they had no money to get them a feed so they we're going to go back home but they could not because it was to far away so they kept on going to there nana.

Then it started to get hotter than Angel could see a shop from where they were they needed a drink of water then they started to walk again then "Penny" could see a door in the middle of nowhere she wanted to know what was behind it Penny and Angel were thinking about what was going to be inside of it "Angel" was thinking about that there were going to be food behind it "Penny" and "Angel"  was thinking about that her nana was going to be behind the door.

Then "Penny" started thinking again about what was going to be inside of it she was thinking about what if a dog was behind it and then Angel started to think what was going to be behind it two what if a snake was behind it.Then the girls were wrong about what was going to behind it "Penny" wanted Angel to open the door then "Angel" wanted Penny to open the door so if something bad or good was behind it she will not get hurt.

Old_double_doors.jpgge Attribution: By Dennis Brown (Own work) [GFDL ( or CC BY-SA 3.0 (], via Wikimedia Commons

Then "Penny" was thinking about what if they were going to play rock paper Scissors 3 times in a row "Angel" won 2 times in a row then Penny started to get 2 times in a row and then Penny won so "Angel" had to go and open the door then Angel said who ever win’s they have to open the door."Penny went to go open the door and inside it was her nana Penny was happy to see her nana and Angel was to but they were so Hungry to so there nana made them some egg’s and chicken so that how my story ends.


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